Thursday, 27 February 2020

Swimming Sports

When we arrived at the pool we put on out togs. People were watching us. The kids were sitting and waiting for their races. I could hear cheering like GO!

I had to swim breaststroke. I felt nervous. It was fun getting into the warm water. I swam my fastest against Wolfe.

We lined up outside. We got on the bus and went back to school.


2 comments:

  1. Hi It's Oliver Tilghman from room 3,
    I like how you said you swam your fastest and you tried your hardest. I remember that I love swimming when I was younger and I tried my hardest to get the ring that my mum through in. I also like that you mentioned Wolfe in your story because that's when I know who you faced in swimming. What place did you come in swimming? And how did your other races go?

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